Problem: most candidates spend 40 minutes writing and zero minutes editing — then lose marks to faults a five-minute pass would catch. Answer in brief: edit in two passes (tense sweep, then paragraph surgery), because tense mistakes mislead the reader clinically while paragraph faults merely tire them. This guide teaches the two-pass edit with a repair demonstration, and OET Writing for Nurses — Course 4 trains time, tense, paragraph editing and safety-aware writing across 11 topic sections.
Why tense is a patient-safety issue
“Wound infected, antibiotics started” in past tense reads as resolved history; in present perfect (“has become infected”) it reads as today’s problem. The GP acts — or does not — on your verb choice. That is why this course frames tense as safety, not decoration: every tense fault is scored twice in effect, once in Language and once in the reader’s trust. Editing is therefore clinical work, and the last five minutes are the cheapest marks in the paper.
Pass 1: the tense sweep (2 minutes)
Read verbs only, ignoring content. Circle every past-tense verb describing today (“was afebrile”, “had pain”) and flip to present or present perfect. Circle every present-tense verb describing finished history and flip to past. Check passives for agents and dates. Two minutes, verb-level, no re-reading sentences — the sweep catches the faults spellcheckers never see.
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Pass 2: paragraph surgery (3 minutes)
Read first lines only. Each must announce its paragraph’s job; any paragraph whose first line could belong to another paragraph gets merged or moved. Check the request paragraph exists and is precise; check no new facts hide in the closing line. Surgery is structural — resist rewording sentences, which burns minutes for zero marks.
Repair demonstration: infected wound letter
Fictional draft faults, newly written: “Wound was red and swollen. Started antibiotics. Will review” — past-tense today, agentless passive, future plan without owner. Repaired: “The wound is red and swollen with purulent discharge (today, present). Flucloxacillin was started yesterday by the practice nurse (agent, date). I will review the wound on Friday; please escalate sooner for spreading redness or fever (owner, threshold).” Same facts, safe verbs, owned plan — the two passes in action.
Four editing misses
- Editing content instead of verbs. Rewriting good sentences while tense faults survive. Fix: verbs first, always.
- Adding new facts while checking. The closing line gains a symptom. Fix: checking removes and moves; it never adds.
- Skipping the request check. Assumed present, actually vague. Fix: read the final paragraph as a stranger — can you act on it?
- No time reserved. Writing to minute 40. Fix: stop drafting at minute 33; the last minutes outscore the last sentences.
FAQs
How should I split 40 minutes?
Plan 8–10, draft 20–22, edit 5–8. Writers who “have no time to check” usually over-draft; a shorter draft with a real edit outscores a longer draft without one.
Does spelling matter as much as tense?
Both sit in Language, but tense faults additionally damage Content trust — a misspelt word never sends a GP down the wrong path, a wrong tense can. Prioritise accordingly.
What is in the course?
Eleven topic sections on time and tense, paragraph editing challenges and safety-aware writing, with 36 lessons and 5 complete mock tests.
The matching course
OET Writing for Nurses — Course 4 is the editing course: tense as patient safety, paragraph surgery, proofreading under time pressure — 11 topic sections, 36 lessons, 5 mock tests. If your drafts are good and your marks are not, the fault is in the last five minutes.
Sources and note
- OET Writing format per the official OET site: oet.com — Writing. Check current format guidance before the exam.
- Course details verified from its public staging page (read-only): 11 topic sections, 36 lessons, 5 mock tests.
- Repair lines are newly written and fictional; other valid structures exist.
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