A neutral essay does not need to sound like a legal document. It needs a clear position, appropriate language and reasons that a reader can follow.
The target-reader section in Achieve Success in B2 First Writing distinguishes a reasoned essay from a casual message to a friend. Here are practical ways to make that distinction without filling your writing with unfamiliar vocabulary.
Replace an insult with an explanation
“The idea is stupid” dismisses a proposal without showing why. Identify the actual problem: cost, access, time or another relevant concern. Then explain the connection.
Original style revision
Casual judgement: “Making everyone buy a new laptop is a terrible idea.”
Reasoned version: “Requiring every learner to buy a new laptop could exclude those who cannot afford the additional cost.”
Keep your position visible
A more neutral style does not mean hiding your opinion. “I believe” and “in my view” can introduce a position when an opinion is requested. The sentences that follow should support it rather than repeat the same declaration.
Revise a vague claim
Draft: “Online lessons are super good for everybody.”
Possible revision: “Online lessons can be useful for learners who need to avoid a long journey, although access to a suitable device remains important.”
The revision gives a reason and narrows an unsupported claim about everybody.
Prefer precision to unnecessary complexity
“Improve” may be a useful alternative to “get better,” but replacing every familiar word with a longer one can make the response awkward. Choose vocabulary that expresses the meaning accurately and fits naturally with surrounding words.
For your next review, highlight the strongest claims in your draft. Check that each has a relevant explanation and that words such as “all,” “always” and “never” are justified. Make the argument more precise before making it more elaborate.
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